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[Ruby] - 2021년 05월 05일 Wed #526

Open hichunhee opened 3 years ago

hichunhee commented 3 years ago

I woke up at 8:30 am. It was sunny out today. I took a shower and I did the laundry. I drove to a hospital where my mom stays because my mom has been staying in the hospital for 2 weeks. I stayed there for 2 hours.

I came back home at 2 pm. I took a nap for about an hour. I studied English and I watched 'The live academy' on YOUTUBE

In the afternoon, I went to 경복궁 for a night tour. I went there by subway. It was crowded. I printed out my ticket, using a kiosk. There were many couples wearing Hanbok. It was good to see them. The night view was wonderful. So I took pictures. I spent about an hour there.

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shawn-hy1232 commented 3 years ago

Good!

  1. 'I drove to a hospital' -> 'I drove to a hospital where my mom stays'

  2. 'I stayed there 2 hours.' -> 'I stayed there for 2 hours.'

  3. 'I took a nap around an hour.' -> 'I took a nap for about an hour.'

  4. 'In the afternoon. I went to night tour in 경복궁 by subway.' -> 'In the afternoon, I went to 경복궁 for a night tour. I went there by subway.' (한 문장에 너무 많은 정보를 담는 것을 피하세요!)

  5. 'I inputted reservation number using a kiosk. Then I got a ticket.' -> 'I printed out my ticket, using a kiosk.'

  6. 'Many lovers putted on hanbok.' -> 'There were many couples wearing Hanbok.'

  7. 'So I took the pictures.' -> 'So I took pictures.'