[Ruby] - 2021년 05월 14일 Fri.

[hichunhee]

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Finally, I have finished an important meeting from 9 to 10 am. So I just felt good. After the meeting,I went to a cafe with the people from the meeting. We had some cheese 🧀 cake with coffee. We talked about what is going on in the world. Their story was so funny. Around 11:30 am, We had Korean cold noodles, slices of boiled meat and raw rice wine for lunch. After lunch, We went to a cafe to get some drinks. And then, We talked about each other's life.Our company needs an experienced worker. So we are looking for someone who is suitable for the job. And I told this situation to these people. One of them recommended his friend. He said his friend is a skilled worker. But I didn't like his recommendation. Around 2 pm, I came back to the office.

I had to do a lot of work like yesterday. I got off work at 6 pm.

I can't wait to get to bed tonight🌙. I'm so tired.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I went for a cafe with the people at the meeting.' -> 'I went to a cafe with the people from the meeting.'

2. 'We talked about in the world.' -> 'We talked about what is going on in the world.'

3. 'We went to a cafe to some drinks.' -> 'We went to a cafe to get some drinks.'

4. 'One of them recommended person for experience employee.' -> ??

5. 'But, I hated his recommend.' -> 'But I hated his recommendation.'

[hichunhee]

4.'One of them recommended person for experience employee.' -> ??

One of them, He told me about his experience in a company in years past. Especially, He told me about a person who was grateful for him. And then, He remembered the person for experience employee. Because I getting staff. But, I hated his recommendation.

[shawn-hy1232]

Our company needs an experienced worker. So we are looking for someone who is suitable for the job. And I told this situation to these people. One of them recommended his friend. He said his friend is a skilled worker. But I didn't like his recommendation.

[hichunhee]

I appreciate you for letting me know.