[Ruby] - 2021년 05월 15일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early in the morning. Because my dog barked. 🐕 It was cloudy out in the morning and it was rainy 🌧 out in the afternoon. I took a shower and I did the laundry. I practiced reading the textbook out loud for a while. I walked 🚶‍♀️to Talk-Talk at 9 am. I learned about sentence analysis like last time. Shawn still kindly taught me. It has been two months since I started learning English, but I get nervous when I am in class. I left Talk-Talk academy at 10 : 10 am. Today, I was day off but I went to work by subway. On the subway train🚇, I texted Shawn "Shawn, Thanks always" because today was Teacher's day. I worked hard , Because I have to do work until monday, And then I got off work at 3 pm. I met my best friend 💓 HyunYoung's older sister at her house. I went to her house by a bus 🚌. We had Chinese food and 3 bottles of red wine🍷. I really like her because she is frank and intense. And she also likes me. We talked about each other's life. Her husband quit his job recently. So she has many worries. Her husband and her oldest daughter came back to Korea 🇰🇷 from the States last month. Her oldest daughter is on vacation so she staying at home for a while. Her daughter is going to the states soon. So she plans to visit the States again this winter. She suggested me that we go to the states 🇺🇲 together and she hopes to play golf with me over there. So I was thinking about whether to start playing golf again. I left her house about 11 pm and I came home by taxi. I called taxi on my phone from Kakao apps. Now, I got little drunk. So, I am having a hard time writing this diary. Though, I have promised myself that I would write dairy every single day. I'm terribly sleepy 😴. So I will go to bed soon. 💤

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I had the laundry.' -> 'I did the laundry.'

2. 'I practiced conversation in textbook out loud a little.' -> 'I practiced reading the textbook out loud for a while.'

3. 'but I got nervous when I am in class.' -> 'but I get nervous when I am in class.'

4. 'A matter of great importance she also likes me.' -> 'And she also likes me.'

5. 'she hope to playing golf with me for there.' -> 'she hopes to play golf with me over there.'

6. 'whether to start playing golf again.' -> 'whether I should start playing golf again.'

7. 'I left her house about 11 pm by taxi.' -> 'I left her house about 11 pm and I came home by taxi.'

8. 'So, I hard writing this dairy.' -> 'So, I am having a hard time writing this diary.'

9. 'everyday single day.' -> 'every single day.'