[조소영] -2021 년 5월 15일

[Josoh]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was Saturday so I had to go to work. Eventhough it was raining, I walked there. Before going to work, I went to Hyundai mall because I wanted to buy a perfume. There were so many brands and I wandered around the mall. I tried different perfums. I finally bought a perfume from diptqyue. I got 5% discount using the mall card. Then I went to work. After the work, my parents came to pick me up. We ate 낙지볶음 for dinner and baskin robbins for dessert. It was a happy day!

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I went there by walk. ' -> 'I walked there.'

2. 'a Hyundai mall' -> 'Hyundai mall'

3. 'I wandered the mall.' -> 'I wandered around the mall.'

4. 'I smelled a lot of perfums.' -> 'I tried different perfumes.'

5. 'It was happy day!' -> 'It was a happy day!'