[Rita] - 2021년 5월 24일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late. Because I got off work at 2AM yesterday. So I went to work at 10AM and I kept working. I had a new project today. The project was for an eyewear boutique shop. I scheduled a meeting with them on Wednesday. The schedule was very tight.

I had curry for lunch late and I took a walk around our office with my team. We talked about our boss. They are afraid of our boss. They are new staffs. So I understand that they are afraid of him. After lunch, I had a meeting. At night, we had 떡볶이 for dinner. I ordered 떡볶이 through an app and another staff bought 참치김밥. We watched Netflix while having dinner. And we got off work at 11PM. I have to go to 용인 tomorow in the morning. I came back home and I took a shower. And I read a book before I went to bed.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'The project is eyewear Boutique. I planed the schedule for the meeting on wednesday.' -> 'The project was for an eyewear boutique shop. I scheduled a meeting with them on Wednesday.'

2. 'They were afraid of the our boss.' -> 'They are afraid of our boss.'

3. 'They are new staff. So they can think that way.' -> 'They are new staffs. So I understand that they are afraid of him.'

4. 'the app' -> 'an app.'

5. 'And We got off work at 11PM.' -> 대문자

6. 'And I read a book before I sleep.' -> 'And I read a book before I went to bed.'