[Ruby] - 2021년 05월 25일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30 am. It was raining in the morning but it stopped in the afternoon. I went to work by subway. It was a busy day for me. Because our company has an important deal tomorrow. In the middle of work, my boss and I went to Hanwha securities company by his car. He moved his stocks to Samsung securities company. And then we went to Starbucks. We had Hot-Flat white and cheese cake. We talked about the work of our company. We came back to the office at 11:30 am. We had Noodle hot pot at 한우리 with our colleagues. My boss told us to work with a sense of responsibility and work with different ideas. After lunch, we came back to the office. In the afternoon, we worked hard as usual.

There were many bad things. So I didn't feel good. But things will get better.

It's been a long day. Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was busy day for me.' -> 'It was a busy day for me.'

2. 'Because our company makes an important contract tomorrow.' -> 'Because our company has an important deal tomorrow.'

3. 'My boss told us to " Work with a sense of responsibility and work with different idea "' -> 'My boss told us to work with a sense of responsibility and work with different ideas.'

4. 'But It was a lot of bed things. So I felt bed.' -> ??

5. 'This is also passing by....' -> ??

[hichunhee]

4. But It was a lot of bed things. So I felt bed.

   --->> But it was a lot of "bad "things. So I felt bad.

안좋은 일들이 많이 있었다.그래서 기분이 안좋다

5. This is also passing by....

   --->> So, I thought that ' This kind of thing will pass, too '

그래서, 나는 '이런일들 또한 지나가겠지..'라고 생각했다.

시적인 표현 쓰지 말라고 했는데 썼네요 ;;;

[shawn-hy1232]

1. But It was a lot of bed things. So I felt bed. --->> But it was a lot of "bad "things. So I felt bad.

안좋은 일들이 많이 있었다.그래서 기분이 안좋다

1. This is also passing by....

--->> So, I thought that ' This kind of thing will pass, too '

그래서, 나는 '이런일들 또한 지나가겠지..'라고 생각했다.

시적인 표현 쓰지 말라고 했는데 썼네요 ;;;

There were many bad things. So I didn't feel good.

But things will get better.