[Ruby] - 2021년 05월 26일 Wed.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late in the morning. The weather was cloudy. I met my account employee at 여의도. And I got important documents from her. I gave her a Starbucks gift card. Because she always kindly help me. And then I went to work by subway. I quickly had salad for lunch. Because it was a busy day for me. I wrote many documents and I talked on the phone with my account employee. Around 1:30 pm, my colleagues went to our lawyer's office by taxi. They signed a contract. And I had an important meeting with a aboard member. We talked about a office business. The important meeting finished at 4 :30 pm.

My colleagues came back to the office. And I left my office at 6 pm. I went to Talk-Talk. I took English class for an hour. Shawn suggested me to study English in a different way. I agree with his idea. It was a great time for me. I walked to my house. I am very tired. So I will go to bed soon.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'And I accepted an important documents from her.' -> 'And I got important documents from her.'

2. 'I gave a starbucks gift card to her.' -> 'I have her a Starbucks gift car.'

3. 'I had quickly salad for lunch.' -> 'I quickly had salad for lunch.'

4. 'my colleagues went to lawyer's office by taxi.' -> 'my colleagues went to our lawyer's office by taxi.'

5. 'I arrived at Talk-Talk. I took a English class.' -> 'I went to Talk-Talk. I took English class for an hour.'

6. 'Shawn suggested me to study English.' -> 'Shawn suggested me to study English in a different way.'

7. 'I agreed his suggestion.' -> 'I agree with his idea.'