shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'It was a busy day like last day.' -> 'It was a busy day like yesterday.'
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'But, some my colleague didn't have lunch. Because it was very, very busy.' -> 'But, some of my colleagues didn't have lunch. Because they were very busy.'
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'some my colleague had some food for lunch.' -> 'some of my colleagues had some food for lunch.'
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'Some my colleague went to work outside.' -> 'Some of my colleagues went to [장소] for a meeting.' (일 때문에 밖에 나갔다라는 말씀이시죠?)
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'After dinner, we also worked.' -> 'After dinner, we worked again.'
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'Because he is going on a business trip to Daegu tomorrow.' -> Let's talk about this in class.
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning. It was raining in the morning but it stopped in the afternoon. I went to work by subway. My boss is on vacation today. In the morning, I reviewed many documents. It was a busy day like yesterday. I had dumpling soup and green onion pancake with my colleagues. But, some of my colleagues didn't have lunch. Because they were very busy. After lunch, we came back to the office. Around 2 pm, some of my colleagues had some food for lunch. Our company has an important deal tomorrow. Some of my colleagues went to my lawyer's office for a meeting. Around 6 pm, They came back to the office. We did a lot of work. I ordered two large pizza and cola from Papa Joens pizza. My colleagues and I had pizza for dinner. After dinner, we worked again. I got off work at 9 pm. On the way home, Jungmin texted me, saying " I will be back tomorrow, thanks director ". Because he is going on a business trip to Daegu tomorrow. He is my colleague. I like him. Because he is smart and always diligent.
I am very tired as well. But I'll do my homework. And then I will go to bed. Good night.