shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'Some of my colleagues went to a business trip at Daegu by KTX.' -> 'Some of my colleagues went for a business trip to Daegue. They went there by KTX.' (한 문장에 여러 정보를 포함시킬수 있지만 피하는게 좋아요!)
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'Because he is not hard working. So we worried him.' -> 'Because he is not working hard. So we are worried about him.'
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'Around 2 pm. My colleague texted me, saying " I checked many documents and there is nothing wrong ". So the important deal finished well.' -> 'Around 2pm, my colleague texted me, saying "I checked many documents and there is nothing wrong." So the deal was closed.'
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'So my junior staff and I submitted an important document to KRX.' -> 'So my junior staff and I submitted the documents to KRX.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning. I went to work by subway as usual. Some of my colleagues went for a business trip to Daegue. They went there by KTX. Because they had an important meeting. My boss and I went to a cafe. We had Hot-Latte and we talked about a senior staff. Because he is not working hard. So we are worried about him. I thought how to help him. I will tell him about that. We came back to the office. I had salad for lunch at A Twosome place. I checked my diary over the meal. I corrected my diary on my phone. After lunch, I came back to the office. Around 2pm, my colleague texted me, saying "I checked many documents and there is nothing wrong." So the deal was closed. So my junior staff and I submitted the documents to KRX. Only now, my colleagues and I feel relieved. Now, I am writing this diary at my office. I will get off work right now. It was a hard day. Good night.