[Ruby] - 2021년 05월 29일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 7am. I took a shower and I did my laundry. I practiced reading my textbook and my dairies out loud for a while. I looked up some words on Naver dictionary, because I didn't know how to pronounce them. I went to 광흥창 factory and I bought some bread. I walked to Talk-Talk. On the way to Talk-Talk, I stopped by a cafe to get some drinks. When I arrived at Talk-Talk, Shawn texted me , saying " I will arrive little late. So let's start little late ". I waited for him. I had bread and coffee while I was waiting for him. Shawn came and we studied for an hour.'. I learned about 'Be verb'. The time went by so quickly. I learned a lot today. It was good.

After the class, I went to see my dermatologist in shinchon. And I stopped by E-mart to get something to eat. I came back home at 1pm. I studied English. I enjoy studying English. So I study English during my break time thesedays. I sometimes get stressed out when I study English. But it is fun for me. I'm terribly sleepy so I will go to bed soon. Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I did the laundry.' -> 'I did my laundry.'

2. 'I practiced reading textbook and dairy out loud' -> 'I practiced reading my textbook and my diaries out loud.'

3. 'I checked my pronunciation in naver dictionary.' -> 'I looked up some words on Naver dictionary, because I didn't know how to pronounce them.'

4. 'On the way at Talk-Talk,' -> 'On the way to Talk-Talk,'

5. 'As soon as, Shawn arrived at Talk-Talk. I took a English class.' -> 'Shawn came and we studied for an hour.'

6. 'The English class passed quickly. The English class was great time for me.' -> 'The time went by so quickly. I learned a lot today. It was good.'

7. 'to get some eat.' -> 'to get something to eat.'

8. 'I studied English about Verb.' -> 'l studied English.'

9. 'These days, I study English for rest time.' -> 'I study English during my break time thesedays.'

10. 'when I took a English class. But It is funny for me.' -> 'when I study English. But it is fun for me.'

일기 문장 분석 숙제 내드렸었죠?? 이 일기는 분석하기 너무 어려울것 같아요. 이번건 패스하고, Ruby가 분석할 수 있고 문법 룰들을 확실히 알고있는 문장들로만 일기 두편 쓰고 그걸로 분석 해볼게요^^

[hichunhee]

I bought "some bread". I walked to Talk-Talk. On the way to Talk-Talk, I stopped by a cafe to get "some drinks"

수업시간에 질문 있습니다.