Open rita1201 opened 3 years ago
Good!
'I went to the hospital in the morning.' -> 'I went to a hospital in the morning.'
'And I got a vi for an hour.' -> ??
'And I went to the pharmacy and I got medicine.' -> 'And I went to a pharmacy and I got medicine.'
'So I got a taxi' -> 'So I took a taxi.'
'Everyone looked busy. We were hungry.' -> Good! 두 문장다 2 형식 문장이죠??
'I feel better.' -> 'I felt better.' (이것 또한 2형식 문장)
'eat a melon.' -> 'ate a melon.'
'I can't take care my house these day.' -> 'I can't take care of my house these day.' (이 문장만 따로 숙제로 분석해 볼게요! 그리고 수업시간에 같이 볼게요!)
'And I got a vi for an hour.' -> 나는 링거를 한시간 동안맞았다.
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
Today I woke up late. I don't usually have breakfast. But I had 김치찌개 for breakfast today. I went to the hospital in the morning. And I got a vi for an hour. And I went to the pharmacy and I got medicine.
I wanted to take a taxi. Because I was tired. So I got a taxi and I went to work at 3PM. Everyone looked busy. We were hungry. So we odered burgers. At night, I feel better. And I got off work at 11PM. I came back home and I eat a melon. And I took a shower. I can't take care my house these day. So I cleaned a little bit.