[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 08일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early in the morning. It was cloudy out today. I went to work by subway. I was tired because I didn't sleep well yesterday. In the morning, I took an online class for my work. I did it for 4 hours. It was super boring. I had sandwich for lunch at A Twosome place. On the way to A Twosome place,I talked on the phone with Shawn. We talked about our schedule. Over the meal, I practiced reading my textbook out loud. Around 1 pm, I came back to my office. I signed many documents as usual. Recently, my junior staff missed work several times. So I told him " I want to have dinner with you tomorrow. And I have something to tell you". We promised to have dinner tomorrow. We got off work at 5:30pm. I went to Talk-Talk by subway. I took English class. I learned about sentence analysis and verb. It was very good and it was very, very interesting. So the time went by quickly. After the class, I came back home.

I am so sleepy. Well, I am going to bed now.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I took an online education for director of exchange disclosure during 4 hours.' -> 'I took an online class for my work. I did it for 4 hours.'

2. 'I took on the phone with my English teacher's Shawn.' -> 'I talked on the phone with Shawn.'

3. 'my junior staff often missed work.' -> 'my junior staff missed work several times.' ('여러번 ~했다' 라고 할 땐 several times가 더 어울려요!)

4. 'So I said him' -> 'So I told him'

Good Job!