[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 09일 Wed.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30 am. I went to work by subway. My office is on the 9th floor. So I went up the stairs for my health. In the morning, I took an online class for my work like yesterday. I did it for about 3 hours. I had Japanese ramen with my colleagues for lunch. After lunch, we went to a cafe. We had Iced-Americano. We talked about the real estate market and each other's summer vacation. We came back to our office. And we worked hard. I got off work with my junior staff at 5pm We had a joint of beef with soju at Changgo43. We talked about our work and I told him "I am always thankful for your hard work. But I don't want you to make mistakes work." He answered that " I apologize and I will do better" I like him. He is very charming. We left Changgo43 restaurant at 7 pm. And then we went to 필스너House and we had black cinnamon beers. He went to high school in Thailand. He told me some stories when he was there. The story was fun. We left there at 9:30 pm. I came back home by subway. I'm terribly sleepy. So I'll go to bed soon. Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'So I went up the stairs by my health.' -> 'So I went up the stairs for my health.'

2. 'I took online class' -> 'I took an online class'

3. 'I did it around 3 hours.' -> 'I did it for about 3 hours.' (수정할게요^^ 지금 다시 생각해보니 around를 전치사로 사용 하는 경우는 위치를 나타낼때에만 사용 됩니다. 따라서 대략 몇시간 정도 라고 할 때는 for 이란 전치사와 about이란 형용사를 사용할게요!)

4. 'Japan ramen' -> 'Japanese ramen'

5. 'We talked about a real estate market' -> 'We talked about the real estate market.' (현 부동산 사태에 대해 이야기하는 것이니 이것은 특정함을 표현하는 the를 사용해줘야되요!)

6. 'I always thanks your effort. But I want you not to miss for our work' -> 'I am always thankful for your hard work. But I don't want you to miss work.'

7. 'I will get better to do work.' -> 'I will do better.'

[hichunhee]

Shawn !

아래 수정사항 "around ".. 내가 틀리게 쓴거예요. I did it for 4 hours 로 전날 맞게 고쳐주었어요. Sorry ~^^

덕분에 아래 정보 고맙습니다 .

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'I did it around 3 hours.' -> 'I did it for about 3 hours.' (수정할게요^^ 지금 다시 생각해보니 around를 전치사로 사용 하는 경우는 위치를 나타낼때에만 사용 됩니다. 따라서 대략 몇시간 정도 라고 할 때는 for 이란 전치사와 about이란 형용사를 사용할게요!)