shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'I arranged many documents.' -> 'I organized many documents.'
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'And I checked the handover documents.' -> cross it out!
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'There is near my office.' -> 'It is near my office.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 6 am. I went to work by subway. In the morning, I organized many documents. Because a new employee will join our company next week. I had lunch at Starbucks. The Starbucks is newly opened today. It is near my office. It was crowded and very noisy.
After lunch, I worked as usual. And I checked my diary during my break time. Shawn's comment is very helpful. So I will review what I learned until now. I got off work at 6 pm.
Now, I am getting on the subway train.
After a while, I will arrive at my home. And then I will do my homework and I will study English.
Good bye.