shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'while I eating a sandwich.' -> 'while I was eating a sandwich.'
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'My team' -> 'my team'
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'After we seeing the exhibition, we drank coffee at the cafe.' -> 'After we saw the exhibition, we drank coffee at a cafe.' (After 같이 conjunction을 사용할경우 완벽한 두 문장이 와야되요! 완벽한 문장이란, 주어와 동사가 존재하는 것 입니다.)
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early. I went to work at 9AM. I called a lot of pepole in the morning. I had sandwich for lunch. I did my homework while I was eating a sandwich. After lunch, my team member and I went to an exhibition in 압구정. The exhibition was about furniture designer. It was great. I want to be a good designer too. After we saw the exhibition, we drank coffee at a cafe. And I also drank wine. We came back to our office. I got off work early. Because I have to wake up early tomorrow. So I came back home. And I had dinner and I wrote a diary.