[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 14일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. I went to work at 8 am. It was sunny out today. My junior staff had a day off. Because he got the COVID-19 vaccination shot today. In the morning, I organized folders on my computer and I signed many documents. I had salad at Alohapoke for lunch. After lunch, I came back to my office. I posted a job opening on the internet. I was annoyed.

During my break time, I checked my diary. Shawn's comment was interesting to me. Studying English is hard for me everyday. I got off work at 5pm. I came back home by subway. I had dinner and I did the dishes.

I am studying English. I hope to get better soon. Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'My junior staff was day off.' -> 'My junior staff had a day off.'

2. 'I organized folder on my computer' -> 'I organized folders on my computer' (단수면 'a/an' 복수면 's')

3. 'I put up an advertisement for a job online.' -> 'I posted a job opening on the internet.'

4. 'At my break time,' -> 'During my break time,'