[Rita] - 2021년6 월 14일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was Monday today. And it was so hot. I went to work at 9AM. I got a call from a client in the morning. She told me about the schedule. And She wanted things to be done early. I was not happy with it. But I told her "I will try! ". After the call, I had to go to our project field with my boss. So we went to the field. We met staffs from our partner company. We found a big problem at the field. There was a lot of noise from the ceiling. I was worried. We finished the meeting. And we had 평양냉면 for lunch. And we came back to our office by taxi. We kept working. And I got off work at 11pm. I came home by subway.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was Monday And too hot.' -> 'It was Monday today. And it was so hot.'

2. 'And she wanted to pull the schedule.' -> 스케줄을 당기다? 이런말은 'She wanted things to be done early.' 라고 해야되는데 아직 안배웠으니, Let's just cross it out!

3. 'I wasn't feel very well.' -> 그녀가 스케줄을 당겨달라고 해서 기분이 안좋았다? 그러면 'I was not happy with it' was 라는 be 동사와 feel이란 동사가 동시에 나오면 안되요~! 만약에 Rita가 적은표현들로 문장을 구성한다면, 'I wasn't feeling well.' 이라고 해야되는데 그러면 뜻이 '몸이 안좋았다' 가 됩니다.

4. 'I had to go to field with my boss.' -> 'I had to go to our project field with my boss.'

5. 'We met the staffs of the our partner company.' -> 'We met staffs from our partner company.'

6. 'It was a lot of noise from the ceiling.' -> 'There was a lot of noise from the ceiling.'

7. 'We finished a meeting.' -> 'We finished the meeting.'

8. 'And we came back our office by taxi.' -> 'And we came back to our office by taxi.'

9. 'And I got off work at 11PM by subway.' -> 'And I got off work at 11pm. I came home by subway.' get off work는 '퇴근하다'인데 여기에 'by subway' 같이 쓰시면 안되요! '지하철타고 집왔다' 따로 적으셔야되요~^^