[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 16일 Wed.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 6 am. I went to work by subway. It was a nice and sunny day. So, I felt good.

My junior staff got COVID-19 vaccination shot 2 days ago. Fortunately, he was OK. In the morning, we worked hard. Because we had a lot of work to do. Around 11am, I went to Samsung service senter. Because my cell phone was broken. I had a sandwich and Ice vanilla latte at Ourbakery. It was good. I checked my diary over the meal. Shawn`s comment was helpful. So I am always thankful for his work. When he teaches English, he looks so happy. After lunch, I took a walk in Dosan park.

I came back to the office at 1 pm. I wrote many documents and I entered many data in my computer. Now, it is 7 pm. I am wirting my diary at my office After writing my diary, I will get off work.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was a nice sunny day.' -> 'It was a nice and sunny day.'

2. 'Because my cell phone was checked.' -> ??

3. 'I had sandwich' -> 'I had a sandwich'

4. 'I walked along in Dosan park.' -> 'I took a walk in Dosan park.'

5. 'I got to enter data in my computer.' -> ??

6. 'I wirting my diary at my office' -> 'I am writing my diary at my office.'

[hichunhee]

2. Because my cell phone was checked. -->> Because my cell phone was broken.

핸드폰 고장이 나서..

3. I got to enter data in my computer.' -->> I entered many data in my computer.

많은 자료를 내 컴퓨터에 입력했다 입니다.

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PS. 화욜 끝날 때 급하게 알려준 3 books vs 3 times 의 part of speech 유용한 정보 고맙습니다. 배울수록 흥미로워요. Very good !!