[Rtia] - 2021년 6월 16일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I am tired in the morning these days. So, it was hard to wake up in the morning. I took a shower and I didn't eat anything. I went to work and I had 김밥 for lunch.

In the afternoon, I went to 한남동 for the meeting. The meeting was so tough. Afther the meeting, we went to our office. We had to submit a design proposal tonight. And we had to go to 남산.

We went to 장충동 and we climbed 남산 for two haous. The climbing makes me feel good. So l like to go 남산. After climbing 남산,I came back home. I ate dinner and I rested.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'So I didn't wake up well in the morning.' -> 'So, it was hard to wake up in the morning.'

2. 'The meeting was so difficult.' -> 'The meeting was so tough.'

3. 'We had to submit proposal design tonight.' -> 'We had to submit a design proposal tonight.'

4. 'I eat dinner and I rested.' -> 'I ate dinner and I rested.'