shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Everything is good grammatically.
I just want to give you some tips in writing. I know this is a personal diary, so you can write whatever and however you want. But you have to be cautious. Keep in my that you have a specific audience - which is me and possibly other students registered in this platform. The audience doesn't know every single details of your day. We might not be able to clearly understand what you mean unless you tell it. So it's better to be more specific in what you are saying. For example, you mentioned an online class. What online class was it? Was it an English class or your class for your school? Being specific means adding more sentences to describe the object of interest. Another case would be 'solving the quiz' and 'writing a review'. They sort of came out of the blue.
I think language is all about conveying your thoughts and understanding what other people say. My focus was on the former. To clearly convey and unpack your thoughts, you have to describe them well enough so that the audience can understand without any confusion or misunderstanding.
Hope it helps.
I woke up in the morning and took an online class. Then, I solved the quiz and wrote a review. I studied English in the evening. I have to get up early tomorrow, so I have to sleep early today. I think tomorrow morning will be painful.