[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 19일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

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I woke up at 7am. It was nice and sunny out today. When I wake up, I usually turn on the radio on my phone. So, I looked at my cell phone. Shawn texted me and said " Ruby, I apologize. I don't feel well. So I want to cancel our schedule today". I am so sad. But I answered that " OK. I want you to take care of your health. And I hope to meet you next Tuesday"

In the morning, I did my laundry. And I went to see my dermatologist. But I didn't see my dermatologist Because the machine was broken. So I just came back home.

I had beef with my family for lunch. Today was my son's birthday. So my son told me " I want iPad for my birthday present. Mom! please!"

After lunch, I went to 메디누리hospital. Because my mom is staying here for about a month. My father and I saw my mom. She is still sick. I was very upset. We talked for about 30 mins. My father and I left the hospital at 5 pm. We had seafood parched rice for dinner. I drove my father to my his house.

I came back home.

I drank 2 cans of beer. Now, I am too sad.

It was a tough day.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was a nice and sunny out today.' -> 'It was nice and sunny out today.'

2. 'Shawn texted me to said " Ruby, I am apologized. I have a bad condition.' -> 'Shawn texted me and said, "Ruby, I apologize. I don't feel well.'

3. 'I want you to be take care of your health. And I hope to meet you at next Tuesday' -> 'I want you to take care of your health. And I hope to meet you next Tuesday.'

4. 'Because the mechine was broken.' -> ??

5. 'So I promised my son to buy iPad.' -> Cross it out

6. 'Because my mom was staying here about a month ago.' -> 'Because my mom is staying here for about a month.'

7. 'She is still sicking.' -> 'She is still sick.'

8. 'We talked about 30 minutes.' -> 'We talked for about 30 mins.'

[hichunhee]

Question 1

. Because the mechine was broken.

기계고장으로..라는 뜻입니다.

Shawn ~ 아래와 같이 맞나요? 아님 추가 설명이 필요하다는 뜻일까요? ^^

-->> Because the m"a"chine was broken or -->> The dermatologist' s nurse told me " I apologize. The machine is broken. So you don't receive treatment today.

Question 2

It was nice and sunny out today. It was "a " nice and sunny day.

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[shawn-hy1232]

오늘 수업시간에 커버하도록 하겠습니다 ^^