[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 20일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 9am. I usually sleep in, in Sunday morning. It was sunny out today.

I had cake with my family for breakfast. I took a shower and I got dressed. I went to Gangwa Island. I met my sister's family there. We looked around Gangwa Island. We had Buckwheat Noodles for lunch. After lunch, we went to 조양방직 and we drank a coffee. It was little expensive. And it was crowded. We talked about our summer vacation plan over the coffee. Because we are planning to travel to 남해, 통영 and 거제. We talked for about an hour. We left 조양방직 at 6:30 pm.

I came back home at 7:30 pm.

Now, I am little tired. So I'm going to sleep soon.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I usually sleep in on Sunday morning.' -> 'I usually sleep in, in Sunday morning.'

2. 'I met my sister's family at there.' -> 'I met my sister's family there.'

3. 'And a lot of people' -> Cross it out

4. 'Because we are going to a summer vacation together.' -> Cross it out

5. 'We talked about for an hour.' -> 'We talked for about an hour.'