shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'To my great joy,' -> Cross it out
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'a lot of wrong sentence' -> ' a lot of wrong sentences'
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'We are planning to interview for applicant on Wednesday.' -> 'We are planning to interview new applicants on Wednesday.'
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'I get off work at 4:30 pm.' -> 'I got off work at 4:30 pm.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 6am. I went to work by subway as usual.
It was so hot today. So it just feels like summer.
Two of the senior staffs went on a business trip to Daegu. Because we are planning to do a new project in Daegu.
In the morning, I didn't work hard. Because I didn't feel well. I had a salad at Alohapoke for lunch. As always, I checked my diaries over the meal. Shawn corrected my diaries. It was earlier than usual. I am always thankful for his work. And his comment is very helpful. To tell the truth, I checked my diaries several times yesterday. Even so, my diaries had a lot of wrong sentences. So I felt bad. Anyway I corrected my diaries.
After lunch, I came back to my office. In the afternoon, I signed many documents. And my junior staff and I checked our schedule. We are planning to interview new applicants on Wednesday.
I got off work at 4:30 pm. I went to see my dermatologist in shinchon. And I came back home. I had dinner.
After writing this diary, I will study English.
Good bye.