[Rita] - 21년 6월 22일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 7:30AM and I went to work at 9AM. I wanted to sleep in, because I didn't get sleep enough today. My boss told me to start a new project. I finished one project last week. But I have another project in progress. I have so much work this year! Anyway, I had 냉면 for lunch. And I kept working. I didn't have a meeting today and I didn't call anyone. Today was peaceful. At night, my team and I had 떡볶이 for dinner. We watched Netflix while we were eating 떡볶이. The TV show was about architecture. It was fun. After the dinner, I worked and I got off work at 1AM. I came back home.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I want to sleep a lot these days. Because I think I didn't had slept well.' -> 'I wanted to sleep in, because I didn't get sleep enough today.'

2. 'My boss told me to had a new project.' -> 'My boss told me to start a new project.'

3. 'I finished a project last week. But I have a project in progress. It is a lot of work this year!' -> 'I finished one project last week. But I have another project in progress. I have so much work this year!'

4. 'It was quiet. I was comfortable.' -> 'Today was peaceful.'

5. 'We watched Neflix while eating 떡볶이.' -> 'We watched Netflix while we were eating 떡볶이.'

6. 'It was an architecture programme.' -> 'The TV show was about architecture.'