shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'I think there is a lot of road construction these days.' -> 'I think there are a lot of road constructions these days.'
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'I took care of one to two things in the morning.' -> 'I took care of several things in the morning.'
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'I wanted to rest.' -> 'I needed a break.' or 'I needed some time for myself.'
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'I wrote a diary a little bit.' -> 'I wrote a diary little bit.'
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'but we want to be healthy.' -> '건강해지고 싶다' 라는 이 문장 좋습니다! 또 다르게는 '건강을 유지하고 싶다'라는 말도 할 수 있어요. 'I want to stay healthy.' To stay healthy라는 infinitive phrase를 목적어로 사용했어요. 이 phrase를 원래 문장으로 복구 시키면 I stay healthy가 됩니다. stay란 연결동사를 사용 하였고 healthy란 형용사가 s.c. 에 왔습니다. 따라서 2형식 문장을 가지고 infinitive phrase를 만든거에요!
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'At night, But I couldn't go to 남산.' -> 'But I couldn't go to 남산 tonight.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 8AM and I took a shower and I drank a glass of milk. I walked to 합정 station. And I took the subway. And I walked to my office from 성수 station. I think there are a lot of road constructions these days. I went to work at 10AM. Summer has come. It was hot today. I took care of several things in the morning. And I had a sandwich for lunch. I needed some time for myself. So I ate alone and I wrote a diary little bit. I usually write a diary on my cell phone. But I sometimes write a diary on my computer. After lunch, I kept working. I have a meeting tomorrow morning. So I had to prepare for the meeting today. Also,I had to go to 남산 tonight with my boss. We don't have time. but we want to be healthy. But I couldn't go to 남산 tonight. Because I got off work at 2AM. So we have to go to 남산 tomorrow night.