[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 24일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 6am. It was sunny out today. I had a half day off. Because my dad and I went to a hospital in Iisan. There were a lot of people. So we waited for an hour. We met a doctor and he said, "You are not in a good condition. So you should not get a surgery. I suggest you to think of other options." We agreed with his suggestion.' We left the hospital. And we had lunch.

I took a bus in front of the hospital to the nearest subway station. And I took a subway. I arrived at my office at 1:30 pm.

I received a lot of reports from my junior staff. And I talked about my father’s health with my boss. I made a doctor's appointment for 아산 hospital.

I couldn't do my work. I couldn't concentrate. And I had a headache.

I got off work at 5 pm. And I met my friend at a restaurant. He is one of my best friends. I really like him. When I sometimes meet him, I get happy. Because he is a good listener. We had a steak and pizza with beer. We talked for about 3 hours. After the dinner, we went to a cafe and we had coffee. We talked about each other's life. We left the cafe. We said goodbye. I took a subway line number 2. I got off at Shinchon. I walked home.

It was a tough day.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'he told my dad. " Your health is too bad. So you never do a surgery.' -> 'he said, "You are not in a good condition. So you should not get a surgery."'

2. 'I suggest you to get other treatment.' -> 'I suggest you to think of other options.' think of '고려하다' 라는 동사구(구동사)입니다.

3. 'We agreed his suggest.' -> 'We agreed with his suggestion.'

4. 'I took a bus in front of the hospital to subway station.' -> 'I took a bus in front of the hospital to the nearest subway station.' the nearest near - '가까운' 이라는 형용사의 최상급 표현 '가장 가까운' 이란 뜻입니다. Level 2A 때 배울거에요!

5. 'I had a reservation at 아산 hospital.' -> 'I made a doctor's appointment for 아산 hospital.

6. 'I couldn't my work.' -> 'I couldn't do my work. I couldn't concentrate.'

7. 'And I met my friend at the restaurant.' -> 'And I met my friend at a restaurant.'

8. 'I am so happy.' -> 'I get happy.'

9. 'Because he always make me to be comfortable and he hears my life stories very well.' -> 'Because he is a good listener.'

10. 'After dinner,' -> 'After the dinner,'

11. 'I walked my home.' -> 'I walked home.' 여기서 'home'은 부사죠? 부사 앞에 my 라는 형용사가 오면 안됩니다~. 왜냐면 형용사는 부사를 못 꾸미기 때문이에요.