[Rita] - 2021년 6월 24일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. Because I had a meeting in the morning. So I went to work and I prepared the meeting. I was busy. The clients came to our office at 11AM. And we talked about a design for the glasses editing shop.

After the meeting, my clients and I had 소바 for lunch. The clients are a married couple. We talked about a lot of things. I came back to my office. And I kept working. At night, I had a sandwich for dinner. And my boss and I went to 남산 at 10PM. We climbed for 2 hours. And I came back home and I ate a Chicken breast. And I took a shower and I slept.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I prepare the meeting.' -> 'I prepared the meeting.'

2. 'And we talked about design for the glasses editing shop.' -> 'And we talked about a design for the glasses editing shop.'

3. 'The client is a married couple.' -> 'The clients are a married couple.' 고객이 두분이었네요? 위에도 그럼 다 'clients' 복수로 바꿔주세요~

4. 'We talked a lot of things.' -> 'We talked about a lot of things.' talk는 자동사입니다~ 그래서 전치사구가 뒤에 와야되요~

5. 'mu' -> 'my' 오타조심~