[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 25일 Fri.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 3:30 am. Because I had to pick up my dad in Iisan. So I quickly took a shower. And then I drove to my dad's house. Around 4:40 am. I pick up my dad. Because my family and my sister's family are going on a vacation. We started with 남해

On the way to 남해, we stopped by a rest store. And we had breakfast and coffee. Around 10:30 am, we arrived at 설리 skyway. It was a nice and sunny day. We looked at a view of the sky and took the pictures.

We had sashimi for lunch at 촌놈횟집. After the lunch, we looked around the German Village. And we had Maise's Wessie beer with sausages and Ice cream.

We were tired. So we went to a pension in the American village. And we took breaks. So I took a nap for a while.

We had barbecue with beer for dinner. We talked about of our childhood memories over the meal. It was not fun for me. The only important thing for me was dad's health. It was also a tough day.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Because I have to pick up my dad in Iisan.' -> 'Because I had to pick up my dad in lisan.'

2. 'Around 4:40 am. I joined my dad.' -> 'Around 4:40 am, I pick up my dad.'

3. 'Because my family and my sister's family had a summer vacation with my dad.' -> 'Because my family and my sister's family are going on a vacation.' "~할거야" 라는 말을 현재 진행형 시제와 같은 형태로 "be + verb + ing" 로 사용합니다.

4. 'We started to the southern sea.' -> 'We started with 남해.'

5. 'On the way to the southern sea. we stopped by a rest store and we had breakfast and coffee.' -> 'On the way to 남해, we stopped by a 휴게소. And we had breakfast and coffee.'

6. 'We tired.' -> 'We were tired.'

7. 'But men went fishing to the sea.' -> Cross it out

8. 'We had a barbecue with beer for dinner.' -> 'We had barbecue with beer for dinner.'

9. 'We talked about memories of our childhood over the meal.' -> 'We talked about our childhood memories over the meal.'

10. 'Just only important for me is my dad's health.' -> 'The only important thing for me was dad's health.'