[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 26일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 4am. Because I wanted to see the sunrise. So, my families went to Boriam Temple by a car at 5am. But, the weather was cloudy. So, we couldn't see the sunrise. We went all the way up to 금산산장. We had breakfast at 금산산장. It tasted so bad and expensive.

We came back to the pension and we took a rest for about 3 hours.

We grabbed our stuff and left the pension at 10:30 am. We arrived at Tongyeong. It was nice and sunny out today. And we had Choong-Moo Kimbap for lunch. After lunch, we went to Tongyeong cable car platform. Unexpectedly, there were not many people. We took the cable car and took some pictures.

We were little tired. So we went straight to a housing space. It was Airbnb. On the way to the housing space, we bought Tongyeong honey bread. It was very good.

Now, it's 5pm. I am writing my diary. My families and I are taking a break.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Because I wanted to watch the sunrise.' -> 'Because I see to watch the sunrise.'

2. 'So, we didn't watch the sunrise.' -> 'So, we couldn't see the sunrise.'

3. 'It tested so bad and expensive.' -> 'It tasted so bad and expensive.'

4. 'We came back to a pension and we rested for about 3 hours.' -> 'We came back to the pension and we took a rest for about 3 hours.'

5. 'We grabbed stuff' -> 'We grabbed our stuff.'

6. 'We little tired.' -> 'We were little tired.'

7. 'My families and I are resting.' -> 'My families and I are taking a break.'

[hichunhee]

Shawn

1. Because I see to watch the sunrise.

일출을 보기위해서 라는 뜻이었습니다

see to watch 해석을 어떻게 해야 되나요?

[shawn-hy1232]

제가 잘못 적었네요 ㅎㅎ

'Because I wanted to watch the sunrise.' -> 'Because I wanted to see the sunrise.'

'watch'는 영화나 tv를 관람할때 쓰는 동사고, 이렇게 무언가를 볼때는 'see'라는 동사를 사용합니다.