[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 27일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

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I slept in the morning.

My dad had a little fever at last night. Fortunately, my dad shook off the fever in the morning. So, we just stayed at the housing space in the morning. We had ramen and my dad had abalone rice porridge for breakfast. Around 10:30 am, we grabbed our stuff and left the housing space.

We went to Geoje Island. On the way to Geoje island, we had 멸치쌈밥 for lunch at a 멸치쌈밥 restaurant. It was good. After the lunch, we checked in at Hanwha Belvedere resort. There were a lot of people. We got a ocean view room. We are planning to stay here for 2 days from now. We took a break for about 2 hours at the Belvedere. And then we went to Geoje prison camp. Because we had to reserve the monorail. We lined up at the monorail boarding station. But, we didn't take the monorail. Because the monorail was suddenly broken. So, we got the refund. We had Braised cutlassfish and fried cutlassfish at 갈치도 for dinner. It was very good. After the dinner, we came back to the resort. My sister and I took a walk around the resort. It was beautiful for us to see night view. I was tired. So I quickly took a shower. And I will go to bed soon.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Fortunately, my dad shook off fever' -> 'Fortunately, my dad shook off the fever'

2. 'We had a ramen' -> 'We had ramen.'

3. 'left at the housing space.' -> 'left the housing space.'

4. 'On the way to the Geoje Island, we had 멸치쌈밥 at the Geoje 멸치쌈밥 restaurant for lunch.' -> 'On the way to Geoje island, we had 멸치쌈밥 for lunch at a 멸치쌈밥 restaurant.

5. 'We are planning to stay for 2 days from now.' -> 'We are planning to stay here for 2 days from now.'

6. 'Because we had to reservation to take monorail.' -> 'Because we had to reserve the the monorail.' Reservation은 예약이라는 명사이기 때문에 reserve, 예약하다 라는 동사를 사용해야합니다.

7. 'Because the monorail is suddenly broken.' -> 'Because the monorail was suddenly broken.'

8. 'Necessarily, we received refund.' -> 'So, we got the refund.'

9. 'It was beautiful for our to see night view.' -> 'It was beautiful.' We의 목적격은 us 입니다. our는 소유격 형용사입니다~.

[hichunhee]

Shawn

6. Because we had to reservation to take monorail.' -> 'Because we had to reserve the the monorail.' 

'Because we had to reserve the the monorail.' -> Reserve 는 타동사로 the monorail ? 맞나요?

[shawn-hy1232]

네! ㅎㅎ 제가 실수로 the를 두번 적었네요