[Ruby] - 2021년 06월 28일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late in the morning.

When I woke up, my sister and my dad went to eat breakfast. And other family members slept in. I skipped breakfast. But other family members went to eat breakfast.

Around 9am, my sister and I had a coffee with some bread at the Blackup coffee. The store is on the fifth floor. And we called the hospital to ask some questions about my dad's health. We made a doctor's appointment. And then we got our foot massage with my dad for 30 mins.

My sister's family went to a swimming pool. But my family didn't go to the swimming pool. My family and my dad had 보말칼국수 for lunch. After lunch, we went to 매미성. We looked around 매미성. The weather was windy. My son had grilled ice cream. It was amazing and good. The grilled ice cream was made with marshmallow and ice cream.

We came back to the resort. My nephews were still swimming. It was very quiet. So, we got happy. And we took a nap for about an hour.

We booked a sunset cruise for this evening. Around 6:30 pm, we went to the concierge desk. They checked our identification. And we got onto the cruise. We took some pictures. After an hour, we came back to the resort. The sunset cruise was exciting for us but we couldn't see the sunset. Because it was cloudy.

Now, my families are taking a break. After a while, we will talk about my dad's health. I want my families to be healthy and happy.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'my sister and my dad went to breakfast.' -> 'my sister and my dad went to eat breakfast.' 이 문장은 밥먹으러 갔다라는 뜻입니다. 여기에서는 go 라는 동사뒤에 to 부정사구 (부사적용법)가 뒤따른 것입니다. ~하러 갔다

2. 'And other families overslept.' -> 'And other family members slept in.'

3. 'But other families went to a food court in the resort.' -> 'But other family members went to eat breakfast.'

4. 'to ask questions about dad's health.' -> 'to ask some questions about my dad's health.'

5. 'My sister's family went to swimming pool. But my family didn't go swimming pool.' -> 'My sister's family went to a swimming pool. But my family didn't go to the swimming pool.'

6. 'We saw around 매미성.' -> 'We looked around 매미성.'

7. 'In the middle to see, my son had grill ice cream.' -> 'And my son had grilled ice cream.'

8. 'The grill ice cream made a grill marshmallow and ice cream.' -> 'The grilled ice cream was made with marshmallow and ice cream.' (수업 시간에 수동태에 대해서 잠시 말씀드릴게요!)

9. 'My sibchildren were still swimming.' -> 'My nephews were still swimming.'

10. 'a concierge desk.' -> 'the concierge desk' 그 리조트의 인포 데스크이기 때문에 특정함을 나타내는 the를 사용합니다.

11. 'The concierge checked our identification.' -> 'They checked our identification.' 여기서 they는 인포데스크에 있는 사람들을 지칭합니다. 우리가 이 사람들을 언급한적은 없지만 편리성을 위해 그냥 they라고 지칭할수 있습니다. 만약 한명이 인포에 었을지라도 그곳에 일 하는 사람들은 다수 이기때문에 그들을 묶어서 they로 지칭합니다.

12. 'And then we boarded a ship.' -> 'And we got onto the cruise.'

13. 'we shouldn't see the sunset.' -> 'we couldn't see the sunset.'

14. 'my families are talking a break.' -> 'my families are taking a break.'