[Rita] - 2021년 6월 30일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late and I didn't want to go to work today. I wanted to take a taxi. But it is a waste of money. So I went to work by subway. My team and I odered McDonald's. And we had burger for lunch. And I went to a cafe and I ordered a cup of coffee. I came back to my office and I kept working. At night, I had dinner. And I got off work at 1:30AM. I came back home. But I couldn't fall asleep. I barely slept.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I didn't wanted to go to work today.' -> 'I didn't want to go to work today.'

2. 'But I was a waste of money.' -> 'But it is a waste of money.'

3. 'mecdonald' -> 'McDonald's'

4. 'I odered cup of coffee.' -> 'I ordered a cup of coffee.'

5. 'In the night, I had for dinner' -> 'At night, I had dinner.'

6. 'But I didn't come to sleep. I slept barely.' -> 'But I couldn't fall asleep. I barely slept.'