[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 01일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30 am. It was sunny out today.

I went to work. It has been a week since I went to work last time. So, I had to do a lot of things. In the middle of work, my boss told me "Ruby! I want to have some coffee with you little bit later." So, we went to a cafe and we had hot-Latte. We talked about my trip. Around 10:30am, we came back to our office. I wasn't hungry. So I skipped lunch. I just stayed at my seat and I checked my diary. Around 2 pm, my junior staff and I interviewed a new applicant. I asked many questions. She answered them all. But I didn't like her. After an hour, we came back to our office. I couldn't concentrate. So, I went up the stairs from the first floor to the ninth floor several times. I printed out my diary. I got off work at 5 pm. I went to Talk-Talk by subway. On the subway train, I ordered coffee and bread from Starbucks on my phone. But I made a mistake. So, I didn't pick them up and I reordered Iced-Americano. After I grabbed drinks, I took English class for an hour. It was a make-up class. First of all, I read Shawn my diaries. And I asked some questions. He answered them all in detail. And I took some notes. Second, Shawn made me read my textbook. But I couldn't concentrate again. So, I stopped reading and I told Shawn " Shawn! I apologize. I want to stop reading " And then I learned about chapter 7. The chapter 7 is about the present continuous tense. After the class, I walked home slowly.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'In the middle to work,' -> 'In the middle of work,'

2. 'I want you to drink coffee after a short while.' -> 'I want to have some coffee with you little bit later.'

3. 'We talked about my travel story.' -> 'We talked about my trip.'

4. 'But I was not sure that the application was good enough to do.' -> 'I didn't like her.'

5. 'I didn't concentrate.' -> 'I couldn't concentrate.'

6. 'It's a make-up class.' -> 'It was a make-up class.'

7. 'First,' -> 'First of all,'

8. 'So I wrote down my note.' -> 'And I took some notes.' (노트필기하다 -> take notes)

9. 'Shawn made me speak about my textbook.' -> 'Shawn made me read my textbook.'

10. 'But I didn't also concentrate. So, I stopped speaking' -> 'But I couldn't concentrate again. So, I stopped reading'

11. 'I want to stop speaking' -> 'I want to stop reading'

12. 'present progressive tense.' -> 'present continuous tense.'

13. 'I walked slowly home.' -> 'I walked home slowly.'

14. 'I was a blank all day.' -> Cross it out