[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 02일 Fri.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30 am. Because my dog barked. I took a shower and I got dressed. I went to work by subway. It was so hot today. In the morning, most of my colleagues went to a business meeting. So my office was quiet. It was good.

My boss and I had green onion pancake and noodle soup with my junior staff. We talked about our works over the meal. After lunch, we went to a cafe and we had coffee. We talked about the new applicant. We left the cafe at 1 pm. We came back to our office.

Around 2 pm, my colleagues came back to our office. I wrote many documents. And I checked some documents.

Around 5 pm, I called my sister. She told me " Dad and I went to a hospital. He needs to get some tests to do the surgery." So he will go to the hospital again next week.

Now, I am at my office. All of my colleagues got off work. After writing this diary, I will practice reading my textbook out loud.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was so good for me.' -> 'It was good.'

2. 'We talked about a new applicant during coffee.' -> 'We talked about the new applicant.'

3. 'We left a cafe at 1 pm.' -> 'We left the cafe at 1pm.'

4. 'And I checked a law about our business.' -> 'And I checked some documents.'

5. 'Our dad and I met the doctor. And he said, 'Your dad need to get a lot of tests in the hospital and then your dad can to get a surgery " So our dad will enter the hospital next week." -> '"Dad and I went to a hospital. He needs to get some tests to do the surgery." So he will go to the hospital again next week.'

6. 'All of my colleagues get off work.' -> 'All of my colleagues got off work.'