shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'So I felt amazing.' -> Cross it out
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'Ruby! I want you to take a next class on Tuesday.' -> 'Let's stick with our original schedule.'
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'So, I answered that " I'm OK"' -> 'So I said OK.'
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'I couldn't sleep well.' -> 'I couldn't fall asleep.'
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'When I stay at home, I like raining day.' -> 'I like rainy days when I stay at home.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning. It was cloudy in the morning but raining in the afternoon.
I walked to Talk-Talk at 9:50am. I took English class for 2 hours.
First of all, I read my textbook several times. It was difficult. When Shawn and I read a dialogue, Shawn's pronunciation was good.
Second, Shawn asked me some questions in English. So, I listened very carefully. This time was very good.
At the end of our class, we changed our schedule. After the class, I walked home. When I came back home, I checked my phone. Shawn texted me and said "Let's stick with our original schedule." So I said OK. I was tired. So, I wanted to take a nap but I couldn't fall asleep.
Now, it is raining. I like rainy days when I stay at home. After writing this diary, I will go to sleep soon.
Good night.