[Rita] - 2021년 7월 3일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today was Saturday. I woke up at 10AM and I took a shower and I had breakfast. I was hungry last night. But I didn't eat anything. I had to go to work today and I had to go and see my dermatologist in the morning. So I walked to the hospital. It took 30 mins. There were a lot of people. So I wrote a diary while I was waiting for an hour and half. After I got a skin care, I went to work by subway. And I kept working. I had a salad for dinner and I got off work at 9PM.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I was hungry tomorrow night. But I held it.' -> 'I was hungry last night. But I didn't eat anything.'

2. 'I had to go to dermatology' -> 'I had to go and see my dermatologist'

3. 'So I walked to dermatology for 30 mins.' -> 'So I walked to the hospital. It took 30 mins.'

4. 'while I waited for an hour and half.' -> 'while I was waiting for an hour and half.'

5. 'After I treated my skin.' -> 'After I got a skin care,'