[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 04일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late in the morning. Because it was Sunday. It was raining all day.

In the morning, I did my laundry and cleaned my house. My husband and my son overslept.

Around 9am, I went to my office. There was nobody. So it was quite. I studied basic grammar and reviewed my textbook. I left my office at 4:20pm.

I went to 엉터리생고기. I had dinner with my family. My son talked about his life. Some of his friends were studying for college entrance exam.Some of them were college students. My son is majoring in design. My son is planning to join the army next year. After dinner, we came back home. I spent the whole day studying.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Because It was Sunday.' -> 'Because it was Sunday.'

2. 'I studied about basic grammar and reviewed my textbook.' -> 'I studied basic grammar and reviewed my textbook.'

3. 'I left at my office at 4:20pm.' -> 'I left my office at 4:20pm.'

4. 'We talked about my son's life.' -> 'My son talked about his life.'

5. 'Some of my son's friends' -> 'Some of his friends'

6. 'Some of friends were a university student.' -> 'Some of them were college students.'

7. 'My son's major is design in university.' -> 'My son is majoring in design.'

8. 'My son is planning to join army next year.' -> 'My son is planning to join the army next year.'