[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 05일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 6 am. I went to work by subway. It was cloudy out today.

In the morning, the whole staff had a business meeting for about 30 mins. We talked about our schedule. During the meeting, my boss asked some questions to my colleagues. Some of our staffs are going on a business trip tomorrow to Daegu. And other staffs are going on a business trip on this Thursday to Daegu. After the meeting, I entered many data in my computer and I sent an email to my coworkers. In the middle of work, I checked my email. Unexpectedly, I got an email from Github. It was Shawn's comment. So, I read my diary. My diary had a lot of wrong sentences. To be honest, I checked my diary several times. I felt bad. Anyway, I am always thankful for Shawn's work. And his comment makes me want to study hard.

I had cold bean-soup noodles with my colleagues for lunch. After lunch, I came back to my office. And most of my colleagues went to smoke. I brushed my teeth and then I went down to the second floor. I walked there during I practiced reading my textbook.

Around 1 pm, I came back to my office. I worked hard again.

I got off work at 5pm. I took the subway and got off at Shinchon station. I walked home.

It was an ordinary day.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'In the middle of talk,' -> 'During the meeting,'

2. 'Some of staffs' -> 'Some of our staffs'

3. 'I entered many data in my computer' -> 이 말이 정확하게 무슨 뜻이죠?

4. 'I sent coworkers an email.' -> 이 문장을 4형식으로 쓰는것이 틀린것은 아닌데 조금 어색합니다. 그래서 3형식문장으로 이렇게 고쳐볼게요. -> 'I sent an email to my coworkers.'

5. 'Github emailed me.' -> 'I got an email from Github.'

6. 'My diary had a lot of wrong sentence.' -> 'My diary had a lot of wrong sentences.'

7. 'I always thankful for Shawn's work.' -> 'I am always thankful for Shawn's work.

8. 'And his comment made me want to study hard.' -> 'And his comment makes me want to study hard.'

9. 'And most of colleagues went to smoke.' -> 'And most of my colleagues went to smoke.'

10. 'I went down the second floor.' -> 'I went down to the second floor.'

11. 'I walked there during I practiced reading my textbook.' -> ??

12. 'I took subway' -> 'I took the subway.'

13. 'It was a ordinary day.' -> 'I was an ordinary day.'

[hichunhee]

3. 'I entered many data in my computer' -> 이 말이 정확하게 무슨 뜻이죠?

많은 자료를 내 computer에 입력했다. 입니다

11.'I walked there during I practiced reading my textbook.' -> ??

Textbook을 읽으면서 그곳(2층 실내공간) 을 걸었다. 입니다

안그래도 썼다 지웠다 했던 문장입니다만, 수업시간에 추가로 설명하겠습니다.^^

Shawn ~ 고맙습니다.