[Rita] - 2021년 7월 5일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was Monday. So I woke up at 9AM. I had to go to 현대백화점 in 여의도. Because I had a meeting at the place so I went there. I met my team and we checked the details of the furniture at the bakery for our new project. I designed the bakery last year. After we checked the bakery,we had 비빔밥 for lunch. There were a lot of people. After lunch, we got a taxi and we went to work by taxi. I paid about 20,000won with my office card. And we had a meeting again. At night, I bought a sandwich. I upgraded the sandwich bread and I paid for the sandwich. But he gave me regular bread. I was annoyed. I was hungry so I reluctantly ate the sandwich. After dinner, I got off work at 1PM. I came back home and I took a shower and I slept.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I had to go to the department store in 여의도.' -> 이런경우에는 백화점 이름을 적으시면 되요~

2. 'so I went to there.' -> 'so I went there.'

3. 'we checked the furniture detail of the bakery' -> 'we checked the details of the furniture at the bakery.'

4. 'After we checked the bakery.' -> 'After we checked the bakery,'

5. 'I paid about 20,000won by my office card.' -> 'I paid about 20,000won with my office card.'

6. 'I paid of the sandwich.' -> 'I paid for the sandwich.'

7. 'I reluctantly ate a sandwich.' -> 'I reluctantly ate the sandwich.'