shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'So I came back from home.' -> 'So I went back home.'
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'I was busy working.' -> Good! 어제 'I spent the whole day studying' 이라고 적은 문장이랑 여기 적은 문장같이 다음시간에 한번 볼게요! I spent the whole day studying 어제 5형식이라고 말씀드렸는데, 다시 보니 3형식이네요. studying이나 working이나 모두 현재 분사이며 우리가 아직 배우지 않은 부사적 기능을 하고 있습니다.
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'So I couldn't talk anything with my colleague.' -> 'I didn't have time to have a chat with my colleagues.' 이 문장도 같이 보겠습니다. (to 부정사구의 형용사적 용법)
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'I wanted to check my diary at the place.' -> 'I wanted to check my diary at the cafe.'
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'I came back my office building.' -> 'I came back to my office building.'
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'as I practice reading my textbook.' -> 'while I was reading my textbook.' (이런 문장에서 as 쓰지 마세요^^ 다시 생각해보니 as는 ~할때 입니다.)
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'During the working, I got a text. The text is report about Deagu real estate market. And the text is written my colleague.' -> 'While I was working, I got a text message from my colleague. It was about Daegu real estate market.'
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'He went to business trip to Daegu today. And I tested him and said' -> 'He went to a business trip to Daegu today. And I texted him and said'
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'So I couldn't learned about my textbook.' -> 'So we couldn't cover the textbook.'
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'In the middle of study, we sometimes heard a new teacher's voice to next room.' -> Cross it out
hichunhee
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning. It was hot today. I walked to the subway station. But I Ieft my wallet at home. So I went back home. In the morning, I was busy working. So I didn't have time to have a chat with my colleagues. I had a sandwich at A Twosome place for lunch. I wanted to check my diary at the cafe. But it was so cold for me to stay. So I left A Twosome place. I came back to my office building. I went up to the second floor. I walked around the second floor while I was reading my textbook.
In the afternoon, I reported some documents and I signed some documents. While I was working, I got a text message from my colleague. It was about Daegu real estate market. He went to a business trip to Daegu today. And I texted him and said " I am always thankful for your work. I want you to come back to Seoul carefully. And see you tomorrow " I got off work. And I took English class for an hour. Before the class, Shawn and I had a chat. First of all, I read my diaries. Second, I asked some questions and Shawn answered them all in detail. The time went by quickly. So we couldn't cover the textbook. After the class, I came back home.
Now, I am very tired. So I will go to sleep soon.
Good night.
P.S Shawn~
I want to finish level 1 in my textbook when our next class. Please ~~~