[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 07일 Wed.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. It was hot today. I walked to the subway station. While I was walking, I talked on the phone with my dad for a while. I went to work by subway as usual. When my boss came to the office, he told the whole staff. "Let's keep our masks on and let's not eat outside for lunch. Let's just order food." So, we said OK.

Nowadays, I am busy. Because I have to do a lot of things. So, I worked hard. While I was working, I got a text message from my former coworker. He left our company six years ago. He said " Ruby! I will come by your office later today. So I want to have lunch with you " So I said OK. I met him at the first floor of my office. It has been 3 months since I met him last time. We had lunch. After lunch, we went to a cafe and we had coffee. He recently moved to a new company. So, I got his name card. He talked about his work. Anyway I was glad to see him. Around 2pm, we said goodbye. I came back to my office.

In the afternoon, I worked hard again. I got off work at 5pm. I took the subway and I got off at Shinchon station. I went to see my dermatologist. I walked home. I had dinner. After writing this diary, I will go to bed.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I called my dad for a while.' -> 'I talked on the phone with my dad for a while.'

2. 'At my boss came to the office,' -> ??

3. 'Needless to say,' -> Cross it out

4. 'let's put on a mask from now and don't eat out for lunch. So let's order food in our office.' -> 'Let's keep our masks on and let's not eat outside for lunch. Let's just order food.'

5. 'from my previous coworker.' -> 'from my former coworker.'

6. 'He left my company six years ago.' -> 'He left our company six years ago.'

7. 'I will arrive at your office later.' -> 'I will come by your office later today.'

8. 'I met him at the first floor in my office.' -> 'I met him at the first floor of my office.'

9. 'He recently moved a new company.' -> 'He recently moved to a new company.'

10. 'He talked about his works.' -> 'He talked about his work.'

11. 'Anyway I was glad to meet him.' -> 'Anyway I was glad to see him.'

12. 'I grabbed a bite for dinner.' -> 'I had dinner.'