[Rita] - 2021년 7월 6일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30 AM. I woke up too early. I had a meeting at 3PM. So I had to prepare for the meeting. The light bulb was burned out in my bathroom. So it was dark. I lit a candle in my bathroom. I liked it. Anyway, I went to work and I drank coffee. At 2PM, my staff and I went to 현대백화점 in 판교. We went to the conference room on the 10th floor. And we met our clients and I did my presentation. There were a lot of people in the conference room. I finished my presentation successfully. So I went straight home from 판교. I came back home at 5:30PM. And I met my boyfriend and we had a lamb chops for dinner. It was good. I was so happy tonight. After dinner, we walked to my place. And I slept.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I woke up at 5:30AM too early.' -> 'I woke up at 5:30 AM. I woke up too early.'

2. 'So I had to prepare the meeting.' -> 'So I had to prepare for the meeting.'

3. 'The light bulb has burned out in my bathroom.' -> 'The light bulb was burned out in my bathroom.'

4. 'I went to the 현대백화점' -> 'I went to 현대백화점'

5. 'on the 10F.' -> 'on the 10th floor.'

6. 'And We met clients and I had a presentation.' -> 'And we met our clients and I did my presentation.'

7. 'I finished a presentation successfully.' -> 'I finished my presentation successfully.'

8. 'So we got off work in 판교.' -> 'So I went straight home from 판교.' 판교에서 집으로 바로 갔다.

9. 'we walked to my home.' -> 'we walked to my place.'