shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'The two of senior staffs' -> 'Two of our senior staffs'
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'The two of junior staffs' -> 'Two of our junior staffs'
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'Because I have to lunch with my acquaintance.' -> 고민해보고 다시 써보세요~
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'We had a appointment last 2 weeks.' -> 'We scheduled to meet 2 weeks ago.'
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'I met him at the restaurant.' -> 'I met him at a restaurant.'
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'I known him for about 2 years.' -> 'I have known him for 2 years.' 현재완료시제 쓰지 마세요^^ 아직 안배우셨어요! 지난 일기에도 수동태도 쓰셨던거 같은데, 저랑 같이 공부하지 않은 시제는 절대 쓰지 마세요~ (물론 올바르게 쓰신다면 제가 이런 말씀 안드리겠죠!ㅎㅎ)
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'He gave me energy.' -> Cross it out
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'We talked about my dad's health.' -> 'I talked about my dad. I told him he is not well.' 다음시간에 that절에 대해서 설명해 드릴게요.
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'He really worried me. So I was thankful to his talk.' -> Cross it out 제가 거듭 강조하지만, Ruby가 알고있는 문법과 단어들을 가지고 한국말을 영어로 직역하시면 안되요~ 꼭! 영어로 본적이 있는 표현들을 쓰셔야되요.
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'The junior staff reported us about state of a company's assets.' -> 'One of the junior staffs had a presentation in front of us.'
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'he send me a doctor's phone number.' -> 'he gave me a doctor's phone number.' send 의 과거는 sent입니다.
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'It took an hour for me to came home.' -> 'It took an hour for me to come home.' 이런거 틀리지 마세요~^^
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'I will take notes on Shawn's comment in my diaries.' -> 'I will check Shawn's comments on my diaries. And I will take some notes.'
일기 쓰고 항상 다시 읽어보면서 proofreading을 하셔야 해요!
hichunhee
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early. It was damp and hot today. I went to work by subway.
Two of our senior staffs went to a business trip to Daegu. Two of our junior staffs went to a cafe with my boss. So, it was so quiet. I was happy. In the morning, I wrote some documents.
Around 11am, I left my office. Because I have to go lunch with my acquaintance. We scheduled to meet 2 weeks ago. So I had no choice. I met him at a restaurant. We talked about each other's life. I have known him for about 2 years. After lunch, we went to a cafe and we had some drinks. I talked about my dad. I told him he is not well. We left the cafe. I came back to my office.
In the afternoon, I had a business meeting with my colleagues. One of the junior staffs had a presentation in front of us. He looked so nervous. After the meeting, my boss called me and he gave me a doctor's phone number. So, I said Thanks. I talked on the phone with the doctor for a long time.
I got off work and I took the subway line number 7. I transferred 2 times. It was inconvenient for me. It took an hour for me to come home.
After writing this diary, I will check Shawn's comments on my diaries. And I will take some notes.
Good bye.