[Rita] - 2021년 7월 8일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 9AM.  I ran to 합정 station. But I forgot to bring my credit card.' So I found an ATM machine near the station. I withdrew some money from the ATM machine. And I bought a disposable metro card. It took a lot of time. Finally, I got on the train. It was cold on the subway. I arrived at 성수 station and I walked to my office.  I was cold in my office. Because the air conditioner was close to my seat.  So I carry thick clothes in summer. At noon, I had lunch. I brought lunch from home.  After lunch, I had a lot of work to do. So I kept working. I got off work at 11PM and I came back to my home. I watched Netflix for an hour. 

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I hurried to 합정 station.But I didn't have a credit card.' -> 'I ran to 합정 station. But I forgot to bring my credit card.'

2. 'So I Found ATM near the station.' -> 'So I found an ATM machine near the station.'

3. 'I withdraw money from the ATM and I bought a subway disposable card.' -> 'I withdrew some money from the ATM machine. And I bought a disposable metro card.'