[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 10일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. I did my laundry and I took a shower. I practiced reading my textbook and my dairies out loud. I walked to Talk-Talk. It took 30 mins for me to go to Talk-Talk. On the way to Talk-Talk, I called my hair designer. She said that she doesn't feel well. So she canceled our schedule.' So, I said OK. I took English class for two hours. I read my diaries. I learned about present participle and sentences analysis. And Shawn told me that we can't finish our textbook today. And you need to be accurate, when you write your diary. And he explained me his comments in detail. The time went by quickly. After the class, I walked home. I took a nap. And I studied English. It was so fun for me.

In the late afternoon, I talked on my phone with my mom. My mom is at a hospital. I wanted to see my mom. But I couldn't see my mom. The hospital doesn't allow visitors because of COVID-19.

After writing this diary, I will go to bed.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'She said me " I apologize. I feel bad. So, I want to cancel our schedule." So, I said OK.' -> She said that she doesn't feel well. So she canceled our schedule.'

2. 'analysis sentences.' -> 'sentence analysis'

3. 'And Shawn said me " We will can not cover our textbook today.' -> 'And Shawn told me that we can't finish our textbook today.'

4. 'And he explaned me diary's comments in detail.' -> 'And he explained me his comments in detail.'

5. 'The hospital prohibited interview due to COVID-19.' -> 'The hospital doesn't allow visitors because of COVID-19.