shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'I sent to text everyone in my office.' -> 다시 써보세요~
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'We were scanning QR code' -> 과거 진행시제?
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'My boss told me that we have to be careful for COVID-19.' -> Cross it out 여기서 careful은 어색합니다.
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'some foods' -> 'some food'
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'we had lunch in our office.' -> 'we had lunch at our office.'
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'As a matter of interest, I saw Medium app for awhile.' -> 'I checked Medium app for a while.' awhile 또는 for a while 둘 중 하나를 쓰셔야되요.
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' So, I joined the membership at Medium app account.' -> 'So I signed up for the membership.'
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'Now, I am very tired and bad condition.' -> 'Now I am very tired, and I don't feel well.'
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'I think I will be going to sleep right now.' -> 'I think I will sleep soon.' 여기 안배운 시제랑 문법을 왜 이렇게 많이 적으셨어요? ㅎㅎ 적지마세요 이렇게.
hichunhee
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early. It was damp and hot today. I usually go to work early. Because I don't like being crowded on a subway. In the morning, I sent a text message to everyone in my office. It was a countermeasure for COVID -19. My boss and I went to a cafe with our senior staffs. We scanned QR code and we kept on our masks. We talked for about 30 minutes. We came back to our office. We ordered some food for lunch. And we had lunch at our office. In the afternoon, I was busy doing. I didn't have time to have a chat with my colleagues. I got off work at 4pm. I came home. I had quick dinner. I checked Medium app for a while. It was interesting for me. So I signed up for the membership. Now I am very tired and I don't feel well. So, I took a medicine. I think I will sleep soon. Good night.