[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 13일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. Fortunately, I felt good.

I went to work by subway. In the morning, I was free. So I checked some documents. And I requested Deloitte some data by email. After a while, they gave me the data.

It was lunch time. My junior staff ordered some food. And I opened the window. All of my colleagues had the delivery food at our office. I checked my diary over the meal. There were still a lot of wrong sentences. After lunch, my junior staff and I went to a cafe. We picked up coffee and we walked around our office building. He told me that he is interested in wine these days. I like to drink wine. So we promised that we will drink wine together in August. In the afternoon, my boss came to work. He said, "Let's grab some coffee."' So we had a long chat. We came back to our office. My junior staff reported me a few things. All the employees got off work at 5pm. I printed out my diaries. And I got off work too. I went to Talk-Talk by subway. I took English class for 2 hours. First of all, I read my diaries. And Shawn explained his comments in detail. Second, I read my textbook. I learned chapter 7. And Shawn told me that he is planning to teach me slowly. After the class, I walked home slowly. My house is located on the 12th floor. So I usually walk up the stairs for my health.

After I am writing this diary, I will sleep soon.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'they gave me some data.' -> 'they gave me the data.'

2. 'It was lunch time, my junior staff ordered some food.' -> 'It was lunch time. My junior staff ordered some food.'

3. 'He told me that we go to a cafe to drink coffee.' -> 'He said, "Let's grab some coffee."'

4. 'All employees got off work at 5pm.' -> 'All the employees got off work at 5pm.'

5. 'So I usually went up the stairs for my health.' -> 'So I usually go up the stairs for my health.' 나는 보통 ~ 한다니깐 현재입니다. 'go up' 이란 동사구 말고 'walk up' 이란 표현도 쓸수 있어요.