[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 14일 Wed.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. I went to work by subway.

I received a new Talk-Talk's textbook yesterday. So I photocopied the textbook. The photocopied textbook's size was smaller than the original textbook.

In the morning, I worked like a bee. In the middle of work, I got a text message from an acquaintance. The text message was " Good morning! Director. I want to have lunch with you. Is that okay?". But I texted a message to him. " I am sorry. Because I can't eat outside for lunch. So we have to eat lunch next month."

It was lunch time. My junior staff odered some food again. We had lunch individually at each of our own seats. I checked my diary over the meal. And then I checked Medium app. It was so difficult to read. But It was interesting. After lunch, I walked down to the second floor of my office. The place is so wide. So I walked there for a while.

I came back to my office. I slept at my seat for little bit. I wrote some documents and I explained my junior staff the documents.

I got off work 4 pm. I came back home. I had quick dinner. After writing this diary, I will study basic grammar again.

It was an ordinary day.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'So I photocopied smaller than the original textbook.' -> ??

2. 'from acquaintance.' -> 'from an acquaintance.'

3. 'I want you to have lunch together today. Are you OK?' -> 'I want to have lunch with you. Is that okay?'

4. 'But I texted him that I am sorry and I have not to eat outside for lunch until this month. So we will have to eat lunch next month.' -> 다시 적어보세요. 최대한 간단히 쓰셔야 문법을 안틀려요!

5. 'We seat down each of our desk and we have lunch at our office.' -> 'We had lunch individually at each of our own seats.'

6. 'I walked down on the second floor of my office.' -> 'I walked down to the second floor of my office.'

7. 'for short time.' -> 'for little bit.'

[shawn-hy1232]

'Because I have not to eat outside for lunch.' 다시 고쳐보세요

[shawn-hy1232]

I can't eat outside for lunch.