[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 16일 Fri.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. It was really hot today.

I had a half day off. I took a bus, number 700 in Shinchon. While I was on the bus, I read English textbook for a few mins. But, I just fell asleep. I got off at Madu. It took one hour from Shinchon to Madu. I met my dad at the hospital. My dad received a medical care. We left the hospital at 10 am. My dad went to his house and I went to work. I arrived at my office. I had salad for lunch at my meeting room. After lunch, I checked my schedule. And I did a lot of things. I didn't have time to chat.

Around 6pm, everyone in my office got off work. I like to be alone at my office.

Now, I am at my office. After writing this diary, I will get off work.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I took the bus, number 700 at Shinchon.' -> 'I took a bus in Shinchon.' (Subway 는 the 맞습니다.)

2. 'a textbook in English' -> ??

3. 'I just felt asleep' -> Rewrite it!

4. ' I like to be alone time at my office.' -> Rewrite it!

[hichunhee]

2. a textbook in English' -> English textbook.

3. I just felt asleep' -> I just fell asleep

4. I like to be alone time at my office.' -> 이 문장은 안그래도 여러번 고민 했었는데, 역시나 틀렸네요 :D

   I like a alone time at my office.

[shawn-hy1232]

1. 'I like a alone time at my office.' -> 'I like to be alone at my office.'