[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 17일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. I didn't sleep well last night. So I was tired.

It was so hot today. I walked to Talk-Talk to learn English. I was little sweating. So I bought some iced- coffee. I took English class for two hours. Before Shawn came to Talk-Talk, I wrote down some examples of gerund and present participles on the board. I had some questions, so I wanted to ask them when Shawn comes.

At the beginning of the class, I asked Shawn the questions. He answered them all in detail. And then I read my diaries. Shawn explained me his comments. I learned a lot. It was so good. It is still difficult for me to write diaries. But English is so fun for me. After the class, I walked home slowly. I had quick lunch. I reviewed To Infinitive. I wanted to take a nap but I couldn't sleep. Around 6 pm, my family went to visit my sister. We had dinner at my sister's house. We talked about real estate market. It was interesting. My family left there and we walked home. It took one hour for us to come home.

I am very tired. It's 11:30 pm. Well, I am going to bed now.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'So I bought some coffee to drink.' -> 좋은 시도에요! 하지만 to drink는 something to drink 할때 많이 쓰이죠. 여기선 어색하네요! 'So I bought some iced-coffee.' 가 더 나을것 같아요.

2. 'Before Shawn come to Talk-Talk,' -> Rewrite it!

3. 'I wrote Gerund·Phase on the whiteboard to question.' -> 'I wrote down some examples of gerund and present participles on the board. I had some questions, so I wanted to ask them when Shawn comes.'

4. 'To begin with, I asked Gerund·Phase to Shawn.' -> 'At the beginning of the class, I asked Shawn the questions.'

5. 'I am still difficult to write my diary.' -> 'It is still difficult for me to write diaries.'

6. 'I walked my home' -> 'I walked home' 왜 my가 있으면 안될까요?

7. 'Around 6 pm, My family' -> Rewrite it!

[hichunhee]

2. Before Shawn come to Talk-Talk,' -> Before Shawn come"s" to Talk-Talk

3. I walked my home' -> 'I walked home' 왜 my가 있으면 안될까요? Home 부사 앞에 형용사는 올수 없는데
   왔네요:D

4. Around 6 pm, My family' -> Around 6 pm, "m"y family

[shawn-hy1232]

'Before Shawn comes to Talk-Talk, I wrote down some examples of gerund and present participles on the board.'

Okay, good! You have made some corrections based on my comments. But look at this sentence little more carefully. This thing happened in the past. So, why would you write the 'Before' clause in the present tense?

[hichunhee]

안그래도, came 과 comes 중 고민했는데, 과거형은 내가 이해가 안되서 현재형으로 바꿨어요.

제가 고민 좀 하고, 낼 뵙겠습니다.

추가로, English commet 고맙습니다 ^^